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the creatures have claimed her

BY MARIA THOMAS

In the tear-filled days after he first leaves, creatures begin to visit the garden—foxes and finches, fireflies, and fairies.

One morning, she finds the watery prints of a kelpie trampled across the lawn. He’d be cross about that. The pristine lawn he spent hours aerating, seeding, feeding, mowing into perfectly perpendicular pinstripes. Now it has huge horseshoes weaving through it like lucky steppingstones. She smiles when she sees them, prefers their curving undulations to his rigid lines.

One evening as she stirs soup on the stove, she notices that a ring of red-capped toadstools has appeared beneath the apple tree. Later, she hears lilting lyrical voices, and spies a raucous party of elves gathered there. They look like they’re celebrating. One sees her watching and beckons her.  She spends the evening drinking nectar champagne, making smoke rings with daydreams, and spinning laughter into silver thread.

Each day brings something new. Moles leave gifts of berries and root vegetables beside the back door—their worm-rich hills are impeccably positioned at the four corners of the lawn. Squirrels visit daily, delighting her with gymnastics displays,

the creatures have claimed her

BY MARIA THOMAS

tumbling and somersaulting along the washing line. Naiads and dryads weave garlands of meadowsweet and dogrose, golden samphire and sea campion around doorways and gateways; she feels almost bridal stepping through them, reborn.

Some days she thinks she should miss him, but her life is too full of charm and curiosity for that. She hasn’t been lonely since he left.

When a letter falls on her mat, she isn’t surprised to see his bold script on the envelope She sensed he’d been thinking of her. He writes that he’s made a mistake, he’d like to return, his lover wasn’t the person he thought… he’s changed. He doesn’t consider that she has been through her own metamorphosis. That her tears have been turned into diamonds by dwarves; that grapevines have grown around gables and chimneys fecund and fertile with plump, purple fruit; that the lawn is now a mysterious fairy garden, wild, winding, and dotted with fungi and horseshoe steppingstones. The creatures have claimed her; she thinks he’d fear her now.

She casts him aside in her mind, folds the letter in half, places it on the stove and watches the Jinn waltzing as it blackens and turns to dust.

Maria Thomas is a middle-aged, apple-shaped mum of two. She has work in EllipsisZine, Funny Pearls, Levatio, Fiery Scribe Review, Paragraph Planet, VirtualZine, Free Flash Fiction, Punk Noir, Roi Faineant Press, Cape Magazine and (upcoming) Punk Monk. Maria won Retreat West’s April 2022 Micro competition. She can be found on Twitter as @AppleWriter.

Maria's daughter also dressed up as No Name from Spirited Away! Check it out

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